Lyrics

This is a part from lyrics I wrote recently, hopefully I can make a song out of this in the future.

Do not be fooled by our broken eyes

We will never quit no matter how tyrants try

Peaceful we stand

Whilst their hands are blood stained

Do not be fooled by our broken smile

we are certain, liberty will survive 

Tyrants can longer pretend

Repression will come to an end

And the people will win.

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4 thoughts on “Lyrics

  1. All good but “Please believe our revolution will survive” & “And the people will win” are too direct and clear…I mean those 2 lines lack metaphors…try to look for other synonyms which deliver the same message

    1. Thanks a lot, your feedback is appreciated, this is the first time I write something like that though and its not finalized, i will improve these lines along with the final version. 🙂

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